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Kenny1983
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Summer Night Sea

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July 24, 2011 2:25:41 PM from WinCustomize ForumsWinCustomize Forums

Summer Night Sky

Hi,

i'm want publish a preview: Summer Night Sea

This is a my Wallapaper, please rate and comment.... write a advice


Good holiday to all .....

*****  Moderator - This wall is in the moderation queue and has not been approved for the Gallery yet.  Please do not post links until it has been released from the queue.

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Kenny1983
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Reply #1 July 24, 2011 2:46:25 PM
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I'm not a Gallery Mod, and this is written as a plain viewer -

1. The lighting on the crescent moon and clouds on the left is opposite... should be from one direction unless explained in the work itself.

2. Don't understand the pale, circular light area in the center and its perspective.

3. The body of water has waves but they don't seem to change the reflection of the moon.

4. There seems to be a light source (dawn?) at the center of the horizon... if so, shouldn't the foreground be darker and lightening towards the horizon and shouldn't that lighting be reflected in the illumination of the crescent moon and clouds?

5. Like the colors a good deal.

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Reply #2 July 24, 2011 2:50:41 PM
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Dang Doc, well said! Were you an art critic in a past life? 

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Reply #3 July 24, 2011 3:22:46 PM
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The preview image posted at the link is really too tiny to access what the image looks like. Previews are supposed to be at least 1024 x 768.

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Reply #4 July 24, 2011 3:34:16 PM
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Quoting Frankief,
reply 3
The preview image posted at the link is really too tiny to access what the image looks like. Previews are supposed to be at least 1024 x 768

yep

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Kenny1983
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Reply #5 July 24, 2011 5:40:44 PM
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Thank you for all advice, i'm is a starter artist  

the real res is 1400 x 900

Now publish a preview 1024 x 640 (Proportion)


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Reply #6 July 24, 2011 6:24:02 PM
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looks good ..... would look even better if it was a Dream

 

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Reply #7 July 24, 2011 6:35:23 PM
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More advice...lose the signature/text at the bottom. IMO ,most wallpapers look better without it.

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Reply #8 July 24, 2011 6:57:35 PM
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thanks for the advice I will in my next job

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Reply #9 July 24, 2011 7:19:55 PM
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Quoting Wizard1956,
reply 7
More advice...lose the signature/text at the bottom. IMO ,most wallpapers look better without it.

I'll either refuse to use wallpapers with text/signatures on them based on principle, or just simply remove them (PS ftw).

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Reply #10 July 24, 2011 7:30:55 PM
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Quoting DrJBHL,
reply 1
1. The lighting on the crescent moon and clouds on the left is opposite... should be from one direction unless explained in the work itself.

2. Don't understand the pale, circular light area in the center and its perspective.

3. The body of water has waves but they don't seem to change the reflection of the moon.

4. There seems to be a light source (dawn?) at the center of the horizon... if so, shouldn't the foreground be darker and lightening towards the horizon and shouldn't that lighting be reflected in the illumination of the crescent moon and clouds?

5. Like the colors a good deal.

I was typing away until I read back through the thread and realized "what doc said"....

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Reply #11 July 24, 2011 11:52:54 PM
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Lighting is wrong.

Reflections are wrong.

Perspective is wrong.

'object' placement [cloud on one corner and moon on the other] is at best 'contrived'.

Prominent Tag is undesirable on a wall.

Landscape 'realism' is thus totally lacking....

 

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Reply #12 July 25, 2011 1:04:05 AM
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Keep at it Kenny... no one killed you.. yet.

Don't get discouraged.. practice practice practice and take criticism constructively, even tho at times it may seem harsh.

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Reply #13 July 25, 2011 9:36:01 AM
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I would not discourage you, I want to learn a lot from you 

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Reply #14 July 25, 2011 3:41:50 PM
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Then listen to the experts Kenny 1983. There are many fine wall makers here. They'' help get you where you want to be.

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Reply #15 July 25, 2011 3:54:56 PM
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Quoting Uvah,
reply 14
Then listen to the experts Kenny 1983. There are many fine wall makers here. They'' help get you where you want to be.

thought you were bout' to mention my name .....

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Reply #16 July 26, 2011 2:51:17 PM
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Quoting Uvah,
reply 14
Then listen to the experts Kenny 1983. There are many fine wall makers here. They'' help get you where you want to be.

 

Very Thank to all guy ...... i'm want learn more from the wallpaper and photo manipolation artist

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Reply #17 July 26, 2011 3:16:26 PM
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We hope to see great things from you, Kenny. 

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Reply #18 July 27, 2011 2:38:49 PM
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Thank You

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