Hope this one works for you.
It's not good, Harley. I mean, the job is nice, but always same problem: very hard to read in 100x100 version.
So, please, make one thing- last one-
1)Grey orb border is OK, but the black part must "come out" of the border, like in Jazzi's one.
2) Remove masks, remove "in the blood of eden". Put only i t b o e- same font like in this one
Make all letters same colour. About letters positioning I think like in Jazzi's one could be good, but also other solutions could fit as well . Just think about making text readable in 100x100 version.
Hope I can get a working one.